You and your family have just come back from a holiday staying in a rented apartment overlooking the sea. The apartment was very unsatisfactory. Write a letter of complaint to the manager of the agency from which you rented the apartment. In your letter: - Give details of the things which were unsatisfactory, - Explain the reactions of the members of the family. - Ask the manager what he/she is going to do about the situation.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to complain about the apartment our family rented from you in Vung Tau beach city
last
weekend.
I have to say that we were extremely unhappy with the flat. Linking Words
Firstly
, it was rather run-down and had no elevator. We stayed on the fourth floor, and we had to use the staircase all the time. Perhaps, Linking Words
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was still acceptable for young people, but Linking Words
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time I had my parents go on holiday with us. Linking Words
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, the air conditioner did not work properly, as it did not provide enough cool air. Linking Words
As a result
, we were hard to have a good sleep at night.
We were all mood-down by Linking Words
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less-quality rooms. My parents felt upset and kept asking me for coming home quickly, Linking Words
while
my husband got furious and kept blaming me that I had not checked for information about the rooms carefully in advance.
If your staff had told me the condition of the apartment, I would have not rented it. With Linking Words
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letter, I would like to know your company’s policy regarding our complaint as Linking Words
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unprofessional service absolutely affected our vacation.
I look forward to receiving your response.
Yours faithfully,
Maria DoLinking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite