the chart below shows the percentage of adults of different age in the UK who used the Internet every day grom 2003-2006.
The bar graph illustrates the proportion of British people using the
Internet
based on age category between 2003 and 2006. Overall
, it is clear that
young people under 24 years
were the majority users
of Change preposition
of users
Internet
, and there were fluctuations in the three types of age (16-24, 55-64, and 65+), Add an article
the Internet
while
individuals who were between 25 and 54 increased throughout the period.
To begin
, Britons who were in groups of 25-44 and 45-54 had the same patterns in Internet
utilization, which they started at around 50% and 60% respectively in 2003, rising gradually until reached the
similar level both of them Correct article usage
a
at
80 Change preposition
apply
per
cent in the next three Change preposition
apply
years
. Meanwhile, 80% of youngsters below 24 years
were used to utilize the Internet
in the first two years
, increasing to a peak in 2005, and then
dropped
by 20% in the final year, which was still the highest of the other categories.
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dropping
On the other hand
, the trend of older inhabitans
(between 55 and more than 65) experienced the oscillations, which they began to use Correct your spelling
inhabitants
Internet
in the different Add an article
the Internet
year
. The category of 55-64 stood at 30% in 2003, fluctuating in the following two Fix the agreement mistake
years
years
, and then
soaring dramatically to 50% in 2006; however
, elderly who had age
more than 65, Change the verb form
aged
beginning
to apply the Wrong verb form
began
Internet
in 2004 at approximately 18%, jumping to 20% over a period of two years
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