The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The two maps depict
road
connections to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010.
Use synonyms
Overall
, the city hospital went through substantial redevelopment in terms of Linking Words
road
access, including the construction of Use synonyms
car
parking, a Use synonyms
bus
station, and a roundabout.
In 2007, Use synonyms
car
parking comprised both staff and public vehicles. Use synonyms
However
, by 2010, that Linking Words
car
parking was only allowed for staff transport, and there was a new public Use synonyms
car
park constructed connected with Ring Use synonyms
Road
in the east.
Use synonyms
Secondly
, Linking Words
bus
stops adjacent to the hospital Use synonyms
road
were replaced by an enormous Use synonyms
bus
station Use synonyms
by
2010, established in the west. Change preposition
apply
In addition
, there was the establishment of two roundabouts at each end of Hospital Linking Words
Road
that connected it with Ring Use synonyms
Road
and City Use synonyms
Road
, Use synonyms
as well as
with the Linking Words
bus
station.Use synonyms
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