The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The two maps depict
road
connections to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010.
Overall
, the city hospital went through substantial redevelopment in terms of
road
access, including the construction of
car
parking, a
bus
station, and a roundabout. In 2007,
car
parking comprised both staff and public vehicles.
However
, by 2010, that
car
parking was only allowed for staff transport, and there was a new public
car
park constructed connected with Ring
Road
in the east.
Secondly
,
bus
stops adjacent to the hospital
road
were replaced by an enormous
bus
station
by
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2010, established in the west.
In addition
, there was the establishment of two roundabouts at each end of Hospital
Road
that connected it with Ring
Road
and City
Road
,
as well as
with the
bus
station.
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