The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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The two maps depict
road
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connections to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010.
Overall
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, the city hospital went through substantial redevelopment in terms of
road
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access, including the construction of
car
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parking, a
bus
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station, and a roundabout. In 2007,
car
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parking comprised both staff and public vehicles.
However
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, by 2010, that
car
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parking was only allowed for staff transport, and there was a new public
car
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park constructed connected with Ring
Road
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in the east.
Secondly
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,
bus
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stops adjacent to the hospital
road
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were replaced by an enormous
bus
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station
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2010, established in the west.
In addition
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, there was the establishment of two roundabouts at each end of Hospital
Road
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that connected it with Ring
Road
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and City
Road
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,
as well as
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with the
bus
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station.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words road, car, bus with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • road access
  • city hospital
  • traffic flow
  • public transport facilities
  • intersection
  • roundabout
  • car park
  • dedicated
  • modifications
  • congestion
  • accessibility
  • hospital entrance
  • parking areas
  • main features
  • signage
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