The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The two maps depict
road
connections to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010.
Overall
, the city hospital went through substantial redevelopment in terms of road
access, including the construction of car
parking, a bus
station, and a roundabout.
In 2007, car
parking comprised both staff and public vehicles. However
, by 2010, that car
parking was only allowed for staff transport, and there was a new public car
park constructed connected with Ring Road
in the east.
Secondly
, bus
stops adjacent to the hospital road
were replaced by an enormous bus
station by
2010, established in the west. Change preposition
apply
In addition
, there was the establishment of two roundabouts at each end of Hospital Road
that connected it with Ring Road
and City Road
, as well as
with the bus
station.Submitted by ramanpreetsingh8800 on
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