The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the US and Japan between March 1993 and March 1999. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the US and Japan between March 1993 and March 1999.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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The chart gives information about the number of individuals without a job in the United States and Japan from
March
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1993 to
March
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1999, in the span of seven years.
Overall
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, it can be clearly seen that unemployment in the United States citizens peaked at 7 per
cent
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in
March
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1993,
while
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the Japanese were at the lowest rate of joblessness, at 2.5 per
cent
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in
this
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period of time.
According to
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the graph, the percentage of the highest unemployed among Japanese people after
March
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1998, by 5 per
cent
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. After some fluctuation, the percentage of individuals without work in both counties got equal in
March
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1999.
In addition
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, it is interesting to note that, in Japan, there was a steady growth in joblessness between
March
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1995 and
March
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1996. After that, unemployment plunged nearly to 4 per
cent
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, by 3.5 per
cent
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. But
then
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, it started to increase until
March
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1999.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words march, cent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • unemployment rates
  • graph
  • trend
  • changes
  • comparison
  • contrast
  • findings
  • observations
  • data
  • statistics
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