The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the US and Japan between March 1993 and March 1999. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The chart gives information about the number of individuals without a job in the United States and Japan from
March
1993 to March
1999, in the span of seven years.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that unemployment in the United States citizens peaked at 7 per cent
in March
1993, while
the Japanese were at the lowest rate of joblessness, at 2.5 per cent
in this
period of time.
According to
the graph, the percentage of the highest unemployed among Japanese people after March
1998, by
5 per cent
. After some fluctuation, the percentage of individuals without work in both counties got equal in
March
1999.
In addition
, it is interesting to note that, in Japan, there was a steady growth in joblessness between March
1995 and March
1996. After that, unemployment plunged nearly to 4 per cent
, by 3.5 per cent
. But then
, it started to increase until March
1999.Submitted by shansharova.assel on
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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