The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the US and Japan between March 1993 and March 1999. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The chart gives information about the number of individuals without a job in the United States and Japan from
March
1993 to Use synonyms
March
1999, in the span of seven years.
Use synonyms
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that unemployment in the United States citizens peaked at 7 per Linking Words
cent
in Use synonyms
March
1993, Use synonyms
while
the Japanese were at the lowest rate of joblessness, at 2.5 per Linking Words
cent
in Use synonyms
this
period of time.
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According to
the graph, the percentage of the highest unemployed among Japanese people after Linking Words
March
1998, by
5 per Use synonyms
cent
. After some fluctuation, the percentage of individuals without work in both counties got equal in
Use synonyms
March
1999.
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In addition
, it is interesting to note that, in Japan, there was a steady growth in joblessness between Linking Words
March
1995 and Use synonyms
March
1996. After that, unemployment plunged nearly to 4 per Use synonyms
cent
, by 3.5 per Use synonyms
cent
. But Use synonyms
then
, it started to increase until Linking Words
March
1999.Use synonyms
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