The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The process diagram details five steps of how electricity is produced using geothermal energy.
First,
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cold
water
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is pumped down underground for 4.5 km. through the injection well.
Then
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, it goes all the way through the hot rocks zone or other words Geothermal zone.
This
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zone will heat up the cold
water
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while
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it travels, resulting in cold
water
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being turned into hot
water
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.
Next,
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the hot
water
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that arrives at the entrance of the production well is
then
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pumped up to the ground, entering the condensing process ready for Step four. After, hot
water
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in the condenser room is turned into a large amount of steam.
Last
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last
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step but not least, steam enters a turbine in order to make it move around so that the power it generates is more than enough to trigger the generator leading to the final process which is the production of electricity.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • geothermal energy
  • renewable source
  • sustainable
  • drilling wells
  • hot water and steam
  • drive turbines
  • generate electricity
  • conversion
  • cooling process
  • re-injected
  • efficiency
  • environmental impact
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