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Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you got off the plane, you left a bag there. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter explain what has happened describe the bag and its contents say what you would like them to do about this problem

#week #flight #london #plane #bag #hotel #airline #contents
Dear Sir, I am writing
this
 letter regarding that I forget my
bag
in
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 the
flight
.
Firstly
, My name is Jon Singh. I took the Air India
flight
 from India to London on 6th
june
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June
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. And my
flight
 number was ATZ4VT and my seat number was A4. Certainly, I put my
bag
 on
top
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the top
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 cabinet. After the
flight
departured
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departure
departed
 I forget to collect my
bag
 because my mind totally
forget
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 about the
bag
. Actually, The
bag
 was handy , small in size and
smoothing
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 blue
color
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. I had my college certificate, Indian ID and some crucial documents which is
a
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vital
for
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 me.
Additionally
, there
was
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 10000 rupees in
bag
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the bag
a bag
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. After I reached
at
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hotel
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the hotel
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 and realized about the
bag
then
 I
immidiatly
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immediately
 call
the
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Air India customer care.
However
, they wrote my request but had not connected with me yet.
Therefore
, I am writing
this
 letter to get some response about my
bag
. I request you please contact
on
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my email Tk @gmail.com as soon as possible. And provide me updates regarding my
bag
.
Your
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 sincerely, Tania
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Unfortunate incident
  • Flight details
  • Distraction
  • Valuable possessions
  • Sentimental value
  • Lost and found procedure
  • Safe return
  • Compensation
  • Assistance
  • Gratitude
  • Follow-up
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