Nowadays, children spend too much time watching TV and playing computer games. Some people believe this has negative effects on children's mental abilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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television
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videos
games
is valuable for kids. However
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can be negative affects
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effects
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could be advantageous for child
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the
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Moreover
, they can advance their logical thinking by playing brain exercise video
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However
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children
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they
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the
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with those activities
, they will avoid it and will angry
if the parents interrupt it.
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. However
, we should help children
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methods with fun and effective ways, which are watching TV and playing computer Change preposition
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can be alternative solutions.Submitted by frens on
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