Nowadays, children spend too much time watching TV and playing computer games. Some people believe this has negative effects on children's mental abilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Spending

time

on

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watching

television

, watching

video

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videos

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, and playing computer

games

is valuable for kids.

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, others said that

this

can be negative

affects

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effects

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for

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children

. In

this

essay

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I will explain the opinions from both

point

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points

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of

views

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view

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. Playing

video

games

, watching

movie

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movies

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, and watching

television

could be advantageous for

child

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children

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. It is because they can learn, improve their self, and

sharp

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their logical thinking from that platforms. They can spend the

time

by

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watching the

video

or

television

as

the

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self-learning platforms and get

the

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points or messages from what they see, hear, and do.

For example

,

children

can use YouTube (

video

streaming platform) to learn and improve

the

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English skill by watching

,

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and hearing and they can imitate the pronunciation from the native speaker who

teach

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or upload the

video

in

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YouTube.

Moreover

, they can advance their logical thinking by playing brain exercise

video

games

to solve

the

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problems.

However

, allocating

time

for having fun

to watch

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watching

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the

television

,

video

, and

play

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computer

games

also

gives drawback effects for kindergartens. It can make

they

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are to be lazy, easy to get angry or

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have tantrum

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tantrum

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. When

children

feel comfortable with

this

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these

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activities

-they will spend more

time

and

do

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not do other or important

activities

(

such

as doing homework, taking a bath, or eating)-

as a

result

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they will be lazy.

Additionally

, when the parents give

instruction

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instructions

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to stop

they

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activities

for spending

time

with those

activities

, they will avoid it and will

angry

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if the parents interrupt it. In summary, I agree that spending

time

with

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watching the

television

,

video

, and playing

games

for

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childrens

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children

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can

effect

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affect

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their cognitive functions in their brain

due to

the fact that the brain is a main role

of

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intelligence and physical

activities

.

However

, we should help

children

's mental abilities through various

of

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methods with fun and effective ways, which are watching TV and playing computer

games

can be alternative solutions.