In many countries, tourism is a major part of the economy, but it also causes environmental damage and ruins the places it exploits. It is argued that tourists should pay an additional tax to compensate for this damage. Do you agree?
In the past two ,decades there has been an explosion in the number of people who are able to travel to places of interest and beauty. One of the results of
this
has been that the locations these tourists
visit have been spoiled and even destroyed. I am partially in agreement with the view that visitors
should pay a charge to repair the damage .
I support those who are responsible for maintaining tourist attractions with a monetary payment. When a town, city
or place of beauty receives thousands of visitors
every year the cost of, for instance
,cleaning, disposal of rubbish, an increased number of staff and provision of services can be high, which places a strain on budgets. Venice charges all tourists
an entrance fee to the city
, which mitigates to some extent the impact of its millions of visitors
annually,but has so far failed to fully protect this
city
from those who come to enjoy it. This
is a good example of why other strategies need to be adopted.
More can be done than just collecting fees from visitors
. For any tourist destination to continue to be viable, not only for visitors
but also
for those who live there or nearby, there must be a clear policy set and funded by the central government in consultation with town or city
councils as to how this
rapidly increasing influx of visitors
is going to be managed. In Germany, for instance
, Berlin had the backing of the national government to control the letting of apartments through Airbnb so that owners of property in the city
were only permitted to let out singLe apartments within their homes rather than their whole house.
In conclusion, the growing number of tourists
travelling the world is producing problems to which there are no easy answers. One welcome strategy has been to charge tourists
a visitor fee, but I believe closer cooperation between the central government and those who are responsible for managing matters on the ground would prove productive.Submitted by sidhugurpreetdhaliwal on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite