The chart illustrates consumption of three kinds of fast food by teenagers in Mauritius from 1985 to 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph gives some information about the consumption of three different fast food types by adolescence in Mauritius from 1985 to 2012.
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