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The pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
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The given pie charts illustrate the online
sales
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 for four different retail sectors (
travel
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,
film
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/
music
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,
books
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, and
clothes
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) in New Zealand in two different years (2003 and 2013). At the onset,
it is clear that
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 the
sales
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 in the
travel
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sector
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 made up the highest
sales
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 in 2003,
while
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 the
sales
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 of the
film
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 and
music
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sector
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 were the most popular in 2013.
Furthermore
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,
books
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 had the lowest
sales
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 rate in 2003,
whereas
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 in 2013,
clothes
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 were the least.
Moreover
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, It is worth noticing that there was a slight decline in the
sales
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 of
clothes
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 and
travel
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 sectors,
while
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 there was an increase for both sectors (
film
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/
music
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 and
books
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). The proportion of
sales
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 for the
travel
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sector
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 decreased from 36% in 2003 to 29% by 2013. In terms of the
music
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 and
film
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sector
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,
on the other hand
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, it went up from 21% in the first year to almost a third (33%) in the second year. Regarding
books
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, there was a marginal rise in
sales
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 from 19
percent
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 in 2003, and it became 22% after ten years. In the case of
clothes
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, it shows the opposite trend in which the rate of
sales
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 fell by 7% from 24% in 2003 to 16% in 2013.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, travel, film, music, books, clothes, sector with synonyms.
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