The diagram shows a method of shaping glass containers.
The given diagram represents a protocol for shaping glass containers and there are various stages of it.
Firstly
, at the start, the glass is subjected to a very high temperature in the furnace at 105 degrees Celsius. After that, it can be poured into 2 different types of mould based on the preferred shape and finally
allowed to cool in that mould. Once that has been done then
it is subjected to the extreme heat of 482 degrees Celsius in the kiln.
Finally
, in the second half of the process, they are cooled down to stabilize the final structure. Once that has been completed then
they are checked for any potential defects and after passing through that rigorous procedure, the best pieces are packed in a box and the remaining are discarded to the waste.Submitted by patelharnish38 on
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