You are looking for a part-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter: introduce yourself explain what sort of job you would like say what experience and skills you have

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
letter with
regrd
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regard
regards
to
part time
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part-time
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job as your
advirtised
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advertised
in
official
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website . I would like to
apply
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this
job I am pretty sure it would be beneficial to you and me Let me provide you a little information about me My name is Ruqayah I studied at King Faisal University I graduated
2021
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in 2021
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I have
bachelor’s
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a bachelor’s
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degree in accounting .
currently
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I am working as an accountant for a company it is very far from my home so I am seeking another opportunity as an accountant it is not my first company ,
therefore
I have several
experience
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as
accountant
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an accountant
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moreover
, I acquired skills in communication and leadership. I am able to work
in
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weekdays from 8:00 AM till 4:00 PM . I would like to tell you I am not able to work in weekends I would like to spend my free time to learning English . I look forward to hearing from you. kind regards, Ruqayah
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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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