The diagrams below show the life cycle of a lady bird and its anatomy.

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The first picture represents the life cycle of a ladybug

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, the second diagram portrays its anatomy.

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, it is evident that the life cycle of

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insect constitutes of 4 major phases and it has 8 body parts.

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the first diagram, the life cycle of a ladybird initiates with the egg stage wherein an adult bug lays eggs on a leaf.

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, after 2-5 days those eggs transform into larva which stays in

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larval phase for 21 days. Next is the pupa stage where the larva converts itself into a cocoon which gets attached to a leaf.

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, after 7 days the cocoon transforms into an adult ladybug.

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, the anatomy of

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insect consists of one head at the top, to which two antennas are attached.

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, it has two eyes, four legs, one pronotum and one abdomen.

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this

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cricket has two wings on both sides of its body for flying purposes and the design on its wing is called red elytra.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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4 paragraphs

168 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

metamorphosis
pupal stage
larva
elytra (wing covers)
anatomy
compound eyes
antennae
egg stage
adult ladybird
hatch
voracious eaters
shedding skin
infested
habitat
protective features

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The diagrams below show the life cycle of a lady bird and its anatomy.

Some people think secondary school students should study international news as one of their subjects, while others believe that this is a waste of valuable school time.

Many developed countries are giving financial aid to poor countries. However, this hasn’t solved the problem of poverty in these nations and so other types of help are needed. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

Some people claim that museums and art galleries are not needed today because everyone can see historical objects or art works by computer. To what extent do you agree or disagree?