The diagrams below show the life cycle of a lady bird and its anatomy.

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The first picture represents the life cycle of a ladybug

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, the second diagram portrays its anatomy.

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, it is evident that the life cycle of

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insect constitutes of 4 major phases and it has 8 body parts.

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the first diagram, the life cycle of a ladybird initiates with the egg stage wherein an adult bug lays eggs on a leaf.

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, after 2-5 days those eggs transform into larva which stays in

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larval phase for 21 days. Next is the pupa stage where the larva converts itself into a cocoon which gets attached to a leaf.

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, after 7 days the cocoon transforms into an adult ladybug.

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, the anatomy of

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insect consists of one head at the top, to which two antennas are attached.

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, it has two eyes, four legs, one pronotum and one abdomen.

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this

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cricket has two wings on both sides of its body for flying purposes and the design on its wing is called red elytra.

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The diagrams below show the life cycle of a lady bird and its anatomy.

The rise of socila media has affected personal, relationships and society as a whole. Do the advatages of using social media for communication outweight the disadvantages.

Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Topic: Crime rate in most countries is often higher in urban areas than rural areas. why do you think that is? what can be done to reduce crime rate?