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task 2 In many parts of the world today there is a profitable market for products which lighten or whiten people’s skin. What are the reasons for using such products? What effects do they have in terms of health and society?

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In the modern ,world there is high demand for
skin
-bleaching items. There are numerous reasons why it was popular in the past and becoming popular in society.
This
 essay will discuss the cause and what kind of effects have
such
products
. In the past dark
skin
 individuals suffered from racism and they used cosmetics to have lighter
skin
. Nowadays racism was passed and those
products
 became unwanted, but society invented them to use beauty. People started just using it or hiding sew and it
also
 helps individuals be confident and shy with their
skin
 colour. Year by year more and more demand for
skin
 bleaching
products
. As a
,
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result there is high competition in the market. Every firm invests a huge amount of money to improve it to become more natural and healthier.
However
, those
products
 do not only have benefits. There are too many drawbacks which can badly affect healthy. Those
products
 contain a legion of mercury. As a ,result
this
 toxic metal can dry our
skin
.
Secondly
, there are too many firms which manufacture cosmetics without labs and dermatologists. People just trust to advertisement and packing of the
products
 and use them. As a ,result people spoil their
skin
 and spend a lot of money on treatment.
To conclude
 there are still too many disadvantages to using
this
 product but I believe that government will take control of all companies and sell
this
 kind of product with the recommendation of the doctor.
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