The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart compares and contrasts the
percentage
of Australian men
and women
regarding the age that regularly did a
physical Correct article usage
apply
activity
in 2010.
In 15-24 men
, we can see that the percentage
accounted for 52.8% which was higher than women
’s, with 47.7%. But the chart got more interesting afterwards as the percentage
of women
ranging from adults at 25 to elderly people at 65 and over was doing more physical activity
than men
.
In terms of men
and women
aged 65 and over, however
, they only showed a slight difference between the percentage
, with 46.7% and 47.1% respectively. In addition
, it can be seen that the percentage
of men
starting from the working age of 25-34 to the retirement age of 65 and over has never reached 50%.
Comparing men
’s and women
’s percentages, young male adults aged 15 to 24 tend to do regular physical activity
more than young female adults but as they get older, full-grown women
are doing more activity
than men
. Moreover
, doing
regular physical Unnecessary verb
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activity
is less popular among the elderly for both males and females.Submitted by puangchompoo4395 on
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