You are renting a flat from an agency. Your contract was for one year but you need to leave the flat two months early. Write a letter to the agency. In your letter introduce yourself ask to leave the flat before the contract finishes explain why you need to break the contract.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to ask for

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permission to finish my contract two months

ealier

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earlier

due to

a family emergency. My name is Kate Smith and I have been renting an

aprtment

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apartment

on Unit 401, 118 Martin Street in Brighton since

last

August. As the property is well

maintenanced

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, nice and

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, I have been so

greatful

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to live here. I

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heard from my parents

last

night and they told me that my father is going to be hospitalised next Friday and having an operation the following week. I have decided to return home

parmanently

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permanently

to support my family

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I have to leave Australia

earky

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early

next week. Because of

this

situation, I have to leave the apartment before the contract finishes

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. I am aware that

this

is very inconvenient for you but I would like to request to finish my contract next Monday. Thank you very much in advance for your consideration and hope you

undestand

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understand

my situation. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Kate Smith

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

177 words

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Structure your letter

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