Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic, and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

It is true that traffic congestion and pollution have become a serious problem in metropolises and cities. To solve

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problem, an increase in the

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price

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is suggested. I think

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solution is not the best

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, and in my

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there are other solutions that are more effective than increasing petrol’s

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with, rising

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prices might lead to some negative effects.

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people are willing to buy a car for themselves. And there is a positive correlation between

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price

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and car

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. So, if the

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price

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goes up, car prices increase, too.

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, the selling of cars will decrease.

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, because

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industry is directly related to the economy, manufacturers have laid off some of their employers. And recession and negative effects would happen in society.

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, by increasing petrol’s

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the cost of the foods and ingredients will rise. Because

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transferring goods from the countryside to the cities

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needs trucks, and trucks consume

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.

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, increasing the

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of petrol has irreversible consequences

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the economy and society.

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increasing the

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of petrol is one

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to tackle the issue, there are other measures that can be more effective. One solution is that the city's infrastructure is developed by the government, specifically in public transportation.

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, expand routes and renew the vehicles, and encourage people to use them

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of their private cars. The other

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is to apply tax on individuals who use their own cars in some polluted areas.

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, in Tehran, province, the capital of Iran, the government has imposed a fee on drivers who use their vehicle during rush hours to reduce pollution, and in some specific areas from 6:30 am to 6:00 pm if people want to go there, they have to pay. In conclusion, traffic congestion and pollution have become a serious challenge.

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increasing petrol prices might be a

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to solve

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problem, I think it has some disadvantages. There are other effective ways like developing public transportation, and applying tax to tackle these problems.