The pie chart charts below shows the online shopping sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013

The pie chart charts below shows the online shopping sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013
The pie chart compares online shopping
sales
in terms of travel, film/ music, books and clothes for retail sectors in New Zealand in the
year
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2003 and 2013.
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, the rate of
sales
in
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websites experienced some changes between the
year
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2003 and 2013,
however
in both years travel had the highest percentage of
sales
and clothes the lowest. It
is clearly show
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by the charts that the rate of
sales
for travel dropped
steadly
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from 36% in 2003 to 29% in the
year
2013. The percentage of sold clothes
also
experienced a slight decrease
by
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8% from the
year
2003 to 2013. Meanwhile
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the online
shoped
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shopped
Books and film\ music grew significantly in that period of 10 years . The amount of sold books increased slightly from 19% to 22% in 2003 and 2013, in turn. Film and music sold items witnessed a considerable growth between the
year
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2003 and 2013 with 21% to 33%, respectively.
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