The pie chart charts below shows the online shopping sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013

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sales

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in terms of travel, film/ music, books and clothes for retail sectors in New Zealand in the

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year

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2003 and 2013.

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, the rate of

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in

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websites experienced some changes between the

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year

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2003 and 2013,

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in both years travel had the highest percentage of

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and clothes the lowest. It

is clearly show

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by the charts that the rate of

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for travel dropped

steadly

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from 36% in 2003 to 29% in the

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2013. The percentage of sold clothes

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experienced a slight decrease

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8% from the

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2003 to 2013. Meanwhile

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the online

shoped

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Books and film\ music grew significantly in that period of 10 years . The amount of sold books increased slightly from 19% to 22% in 2003 and 2013, in turn. Film and music sold items witnessed a considerable growth between the

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2003 and 2013 with 21% to 33%, respectively.