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The pictures below show the recycling process of wasted glass bottles. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pictures below show the recycling process of wasted glass bottles. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The illustration shows the recycling procedure for
glass
bottles
.
Overall
, there are 3 main states of recycling. The
glass
bottle
 will be divided into 3 groups of colours. The
bottle
that is
 sold in the supermarket is composed of applied recycled
bottles
 and new
bottles
.
First,
wasted
glass
bottles
 are put in the collection point and prepared for collection by truck.
Then
, the
bottles
 of high-pressure water are separated into 3 groups of colours, which are Transparent, green, and brown.
Next,
they are moved to a
glass
 factory to remake them. The
bottle
 is broken into pieces in order to make it easy to melt in the heat. After that, the pieces of
glass
 will be sent into the furnace to burn them. In the furnace, they use 600 to 800 degrees Celsius to burn
glass
 into a liquid.
Next,
liquid
glass
 from both the recycling process and new making is shaped in the
glass
 mould to make it into the
bottle
 shape.
Lastly
, the recycled
glass
bottles
 are distributed to the supermarket around the area ready for sale.
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