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The table below shows the sales at a small restaurant in a downtowi business district.

The table below shows the sales at a small restaurant in a downtowi business district.
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This
 table depicts the spending
money
 on a small restaurant in a downtown business area, from
7th
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the 7th
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 to
13th
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the 13th
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 of October. It is clear from the graph that, Wednesday had the most
sales
 on
theLunch
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the Lunch
 and the second most
sales
 on the
Dinner
.
According to
 what is shown, on Monday the
sales
 were at $2,400 on The
Lunch
. And on Tuesday the
sales
 slightly increased to $2,450 on the
Lunch
. As for
Wednesday
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Wednesday,
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 the spending
money
 on the
Lunch
 was $2,595. Next
this
,is Thursday
which
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when
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 the
sales
 were $2,375 on the
Lunch
.
While
 on Friday the spending
money
 on the
Lunch
 was $2,500. And
although
 Saturday and Sunday are the weekends the
sales
 were at their lowest accounting for $1,950 and $1,550 on the
Lunch
.
On the other hand
, the
sales
 on Monday were $3,623
on
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 the
Dinner
. And on Tuesday and
Wednesday
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Wednesday,
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 the
sales
 on the
Dinner
 jumped just $227 compared to the
sales
 on Monday reaching $3,850 for each.
Whereas
, on Thursday the
sales
 on the
Dinner
 were $3,800.
Thereafter
, on Friday the spending
money
were
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 at
their
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its
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 most on the
Dinner
, accounting for $4,350. And,
finally
, the
sales
 on the
Dinner
 on the weekends
also
 were at their lowest representing $2,900 and $2,450.
To sum up
, we could say that the
sales
 on the
Dinner
 were more than on the
Lunch
 on all the weekdays.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words money, sales, dinner, lunch with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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