You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The following diagram shows the life-cycle of a frog. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The following diagram shows the life-cycle of a frog.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The picture represents the life cycle of a
frog
. It starts with a matured
frog
laying
eggs
which later grow into tadpoles and
then
finally
transform into adult frogs.
Overall
, it is evident that the process takes place in 7 distinct phases.
To begin
with, an adult
frog
lays a couple of
eggs
which is known as a
frog
spawn
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spawns
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in the water body. These
eggs
later hatch into organisms looking similar to a fish called tadpoles. After a week, the
tadpole
begins to change its shape and develop external gills for breathing underwater. Once the
tadpole
is 6 weeks old, the size of its head decreases and the external gills disappear, leaving the
tadpole
with a long
tail
. In the next phase, the 8 weeks old
tadpole
transforms into a baby
frog
developing two hind legs
however
, the
tail
remains the same.
Furthermore
, after 12 weeks the
tail
of the baby
frog
starts shrinking and its front legs are formed. As time passes, the
tail
of the
frog
almost vanishes and the
frog
is ready to hop out of the water and live on the land.
Finally
,
this
adult
frog
lays
eggs
again and the process repeats itself ahead.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "finally".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words frog, eggs, tadpole, tail with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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