You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The following diagram shows the life-cycle of a frog. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The following diagram shows the life-cycle of a frog.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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The picture represents the life cycle of a
frog
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. It starts with a matured
frog
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laying
eggs
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which later grow into tadpoles and
then
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finally
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transform into adult frogs.
Overall
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, it is evident that the process takes place in 7 distinct phases.
To begin
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with, an adult
frog
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lays a couple of
eggs
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which is known as a
frog
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spawn
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in the water body. These
eggs
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later hatch into organisms looking similar to a fish called tadpoles. After a week, the
tadpole
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begins to change its shape and develop external gills for breathing underwater. Once the
tadpole
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is 6 weeks old, the size of its head decreases and the external gills disappear, leaving the
tadpole
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with a long
tail
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. In the next phase, the 8 weeks old
tadpole
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transforms into a baby
frog
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developing two hind legs
however
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, the
tail
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remains the same.
Furthermore
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, after 12 weeks the
tail
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of the baby
frog
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starts shrinking and its front legs are formed. As time passes, the
tail
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of the
frog
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almost vanishes and the
frog
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is ready to hop out of the water and live on the land.
Finally
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,
this
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adult
frog
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lays
eggs
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again and the process repeats itself ahead.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "finally".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words frog, eggs, tadpole, tail with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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