Some people believe that education and healthcare should be free of charge and funded by the government. Others think that it should be the responsibility of the people to pay for these services. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is pronounced that the

education

tuition

fees

and

healthcare

costs today are rapidly escalating, limiting the affordability for inhabitants in these fields. Because of

this

, a school of

thoughts

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hold that people should be allowed to pursue

education

and access to

healthcare

services

free of charge,

while

others argue that residents should be responsible for their

education

and

healthcare

. I personally lean towards the latter.  To commence with, a number of people hold the belief that they should be able to engage in

education

and obtain

healthcare

services

because it may be a foundation for a more

cilvilized

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civilized

civilised

and developed country. When the government

abolishs

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abolishes

abolished

abolish

education

and

healthcare

fees

, everyone

have

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chances

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chance

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to benefit from them.

As a result

, leading to

a more educated and healthy employees

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more educated and healthy employees

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entering

labour

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the labour

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market.

In addition

to

this

, making

education

and

healthcare

fees

free are

also

pro-poor policies. Especially for the underprivileged, who do not have

financial

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conditions to

enroll

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in academic studies and acquire

healthcare

services

.

Therefore

, regardless of human financial background, it is fair for people to receive

education

and

healthcare

services

.

On the other hand

, I contend that abolishing

education

and

healthcare

costs have

adverse

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bearing on both governments and beneficiaries.

Firstly

, it would put a strain on

government

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the government

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budget to cover

education

and

healthcare

fees

for everyone. In fact, despite waiving

education

tuition

fees

and

healthcare

costs, there are other more pressing issues,

such

as tackling air and water pollution and solving unemployment

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.

Therefore

, if

a

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enormous amount of money

spent

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is spent

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on

education

and

healthcare

, it could result in

budget

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a budget

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deficit or even

economic

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an economic

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crisis.

Last

but not least, without

fees

, there would be a decrease

on

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in

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quality

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the quality

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of

education

and

healthcare

services

. With a huge number of students and

patients

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patients'

patient's

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access to schools and hospitals or clinics per month, they will be overloaded and

insufficient

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have insufficient

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staffing. In conclusion,

while

some individuals subscribe

for

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the opinion that

education

and

healthcare

should be free for everyone, I am of the opinion that the destructive influences will outweigh the constructive ones.