The charts show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

The charts show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
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the charts illustrate the aims of using
water
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in six different places around the world, there are: south and north
America
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,
Europe
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, Africa, central
Asia
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and southeast
Asia
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.
Overall
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, the majority of
water
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uses is for farming except north
America
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and
Europe
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. In both exceptional areas the most ration of
water
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using goes for manufacturing purposes. The least proportion in all areas but south
America
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is personal using which refers to it as "domestic".
First,
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the usage of
water
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for agricultural objectives in central
Asia
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, Africa and south east
Asia
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are 88%, 84% and 81% respectively.
while
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water
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that is
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used for the same purpose in south Americ, North
America
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and
Europe
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are: 71%, 39%, 32% in a row.
Furthermore
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, The most territories utilize the
water
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for industry is
Europe
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with 53% and North
America
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with 48%.
it is clear that
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the little amount is utilized for domestic purpose.
For instance
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:
Asia
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regions the usage is 7%. whilst in North
America
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and south are 13%,19%.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, america, europe, asia with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • irrigation
  • domestic
  • industrial
  • regional disparity
  • economic structure
  • sustainable management
  • water-scarce
  • population density
  • urbanization
  • data trends
  • resource allocation
  • percentage distribution
  • extremes
  • variations
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