IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 9

The bar chart illustrates the percentage of households inowned and rented houses in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011.

The bar chart illustrates the percentage of households inowned and rented houses in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011.
The bar chart describes the number of people who rented and owned houses in two different countries over a period. Generally, the statistic of households owning increased
while
Linking Words
 renting decreased. After the sum of the population who buy a
house
Use synonyms
 went up significantly from 23% in 1918 to 69% in 1991, the percentage remained steady until fell to 65% in 2011.
On the other hand
Linking Words
, the amount of population that rented a
house
Use synonyms
 reached a peak in 1918, at 78%.
Then
Linking Words
, they dropped steeply to the bottom in 1991, at 31%. As can be seen in the picture, the total jump in
house
Use synonyms
 owning is almost as much as the total reduction in renting.
In particular
Linking Words
, 69% of the community rented a
house
Use synonyms
 from 1939 until 1959 precisely the same proportion of society who buy a
house
Use synonyms
 from 1991 until 2001. In the same way, the quantity of home tenants is exactly the same figure as the buyer about half of the total population.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Vocabulary: Replace the words house with synonyms.
▼
What to do next:
Look at other essays: