The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the Uk between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the Uk between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the ways that goods were transported in the UK, namely
road
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by road
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,
water
,
rail
, and
pipeline
in a period of 28 years from 1974 to 2002.
Overall
, during the period of time, the goods transported by
road
had the most ratio.
However
, the least amount of goods that were transported by
pipeline
had the least ratio. In 1974,
road
transportation had the highest quantity, more than 60
million
tonnes
.
Water
and
rail
modes had 20
million
tonnes
less than
road
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the road
a road
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, and
this
number for
pipeline
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the pipeline
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was under 10
million
tonnes
. After 4 years,
rail
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the rail
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mode increased slightly and took over the
water
mode and reached about nearly 60
million
tonnes
.
Also
,
this
trend was true
about
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pipelines and reached about 15
million
tonnes
and remained until 1990.
However
, the
road
and
rail
sector decreased slightly. But, the
road
sector increased moderately and reached 80
million
tonnes
. From 1990 to 1994 the
road
,
water
, and
rail
fell moderately. But, the
pipeline
rose to more than 20
million
tonnes
. After 1994, all those three modes of transport started to rise and reached their peak 100, 60, and 40,
road
,
water
, and
rail
respectively.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words road, water, rail, pipeline, million, tonnes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "moderately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Overview
  • Trend
  • Fluctuation
  • Peak
  • Trough
  • Increase
  • Decrease
  • Stability
  • Mode of transport
  • Quantity
  • Comparison
  • Goods
  • Transported
  • Significant
  • Noticeable
  • General trend
  • Time span
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