The line chart shows trends in terms of employment in the USA in millions and predictions for the future.
The given line chart depicts the number of labour information in the USA from 1975 to 2025. There were three fields namely manufacturing, service, and agriculture.
By and large, Agriculture became the highest
while
in 2025 it will be the lowest. Service rose significantly and will be the highest in future. Moreover
, manufacturing has fluctuated.
Turning into detail, it is apparent that agriculture took the first position in 1975 and stood until 1977 by
80 Change preposition
with
million
employees, after that the sector decreased to just above 40 million
in 1979. It was approximately 20 million
in 1982 and will be around 10 million
in 2025. Meanwhile, service started from 10 million
employees in 1975 and rose gradually to just under 20 million
in 1979, after that the sectors rose rapidly to touch 60 million
employees in 1982. It will take over the first rank by 90 million
workers in 2025. Moreover
, manufacturing fluctuated. The sector slightly increased from just under 10 million
in 1975 to around 40 million
in 1980, and after that decreased to just under 20 million
in 1982. Furthermore
, this
sector will be the least by only 10 million
workers in the future.Submitted by ieltscuns2022 on
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