Many countries have compulsory military service for young men after they leave school. It would be a good idea for all countries to adopt this system for men, and possibly for women too. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Numerous countries have the rule that the youth must join the military after they finish high school. Many people opine that

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would be a good choice and all nations can follow

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, I completely disagree with

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statement. Three arguments for disagreement are explained below

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the conclusion. First of all,

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should be able to choose their profession independently.

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cannot be forced on someone. Because

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may have the potential and talent to be successful in another profession. So, if forcefully given a responsibility

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it will not bring good things in the long run.

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, Jack Ma, the founder of Ali Baba had been rejected 24 times from the interviews. But, when he started a business, he was so successful that now he is

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of the highest wealthy people in the world.

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, any responsibility must not be given by default.

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, the military is a very challenging job There

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too many risks in

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profession.

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, a military person must have to join the war if it occurs.

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they have to respond to any national emergency. Since

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everyone does not have the same courage to do

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job that's why it should not be forced.

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,

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kind of brain drain.

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may be doing well in the commercial job which does not mean he will do well in the military service.

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,

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may have significant proficiency in

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language, so if he goes to military service

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his brain will be a waste. In conclusion, I strongly disagree with the view of joining military service after school since it will cause fear, and anxiety in many people.

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, the young boy who is not interested will end up

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something worst.