The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The flow chart/processing demonstrates how to produce
bricks
in manufacturing factories/plants.
Use synonyms
Overall
, there are 7 major stages in the process of producing Linking Words
bricks
, beginning with collecting clay and ending with delivering finished Use synonyms
products
to construction material wholesalers.
Use synonyms
First,
the manufacturing process starts by digging clay using diggers and Linking Words
then
delivering them to factories. After that, clay will be put through metal grids that are used to break it up into smaller pieces. A roller assists in Linking Words
this
process to deliver processed material into the next step.
In the nest stage, the outcome Linking Words
products
will be mixed with sand and water to have a mixture before becoming raw Use synonyms
bricks
by either filling into moulds or compressing through square holes Use synonyms
then
a wire cutter is used to cut that moulded mixture. After being placed on pallets, unprocessed Linking Words
products
will be left until dry in a drying oven for one or two days.
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Finally
, once the unprocessed Linking Words
products
are dried, they will be gradually heated in a kiln with a medium temperature, from 200 to 980-celsius degrees, Use synonyms
then
brick pallets are transferred into Linking Words
a
830 to 1300*C kiln before reaching the cooling chamber, where they stay for 48 to 72 hours until they are completely cooled.
After cooling, those Change the article
an
bricks
will be packaged and delivered to construction sites.Use synonyms
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