The picture below shows the recycling process of wasted glass bottles.

The chart shows the process of recycling
glass
bottles and the waste of
glass
.
Overall
, the
glass
has three colours: Brown, green, and transparent. Not all
glass
bottles sold in the supermarket have been through the recycling process.
First,
the waste
glass
bottle
is placed at the collection point for letting applications take the
glass
.
Next,
the transportation takes the bottles to the factory and cleans the
bottle
with high-pressure water, and
then
the factory turns the
glass
into
glass
pieces to make it easy to melt. After that, the factory burns the
glass
at 600 to 800 Celsius in the burning furnace and recycles it into liquid
glass
.
Then
, the liquid
glass
is shaped into a
glass
mould and is turned into a
bottle
.
Lastly
, the
bottle
is sent to the supermarket and ready to be sold.
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