The graph shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph represents the fraction of people aged 65 and beyond between 1940-2040 in three different countries.
Overall
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,
at the end
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of the period, all three were falling mostly close to each other.
Firstly
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, for the USA and Sweden, the previous one started at 9% and kept on increasing till 1980 and for the latter, 7% was the starting mark and
also
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rose till the previously mentioned period. For the United States, it stays flatlined till 2020 and had the final up-ride with 23%
at the end
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and adding data for the second one in
this
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period is that it stabilized for a very short duration and
finally
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closed at 25%.
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, for Japan, it had 5% in 1940 and had a slight U-shaped curve till 2000, after which there was a massive spike and reached the highest amongst all with a figure of 27% in 2040.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • aging population
  • proportion
  • elderly
  • significant increase
  • surpass
  • gradual increase
  • crucial period
  • rapid increase
  • healthcare advancements
  • lower birth rates
  • projections
  • adjustments in social services
  • demographic dynamics
  • lifestyle choices
  • trends
  • notable
  • potentially
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