The table gives information about the percentage of students' attendance in four groups of secondary schools between 2000 and 2009.
The table gives information about the
percentage
of students' attendance
in four groups of secondary schools
between 2000 and 2009.
Overall
, it is clear that
while
the figure for students attending Specialist Schools
, Grammar Schools
and Voluntary-controlled Schools
witnessed a decrease, the opposite was true for those Community
Schools
. In addition
, the lowest percentage
of school children's attendance
was seen in Community
Schools
in 2000 before having the highest percentage
in 2009.
In the beginning, the proportion of students who enrolled in Specialist Schools
started at the lowest point- 12%, which was less than half of the Grammar’s percentage
. After 9 years, the figure for student’s
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student
attendance
in Grammar Schools
declined significantly to 12% while
Specialist Schools’s
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Schools’
percentage
just witnessed a slight drop of 2%.
Moreover
, starting in 2000, Voluntary-controlled Schools
had the highest percentage
with 52% compared to 12% in the proportion of junior’s
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juniors
attendance
of Community
Schools
. Over the 9-year period, the percentage
of juniors going to Community
Schools
increased dramatically before reaching the peak at 58%. By contrast
, Voluntary-controlled Schools
saw a considerable drop of 14% and 18% in 2005 and 2009 respectively.Submitted by joyce.ta213 on
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