The bar chart below shows the average Australian water consumption in selected cities for las year. The pie chart shows the distribution of Australian water consumption for last year
The bar chart illustrates the average
water
used in 6 different cities (Sydney, Use synonyms
Perth
, Adelaide, Brisbane, Melbourne and Canberra )in Australia in 2014 , Use synonyms
whereas
the pie chart depicts the distribution of Linking Words
water
consumption in many sectors of life in that period. In general, Use synonyms
Perth
was the largest Use synonyms
water
use each year Use synonyms
while
Canberra was the lowest. Linking Words
Moreover
, in terms of the distribution of Linking Words
water
consumption, agriculture was the most popular Use synonyms
sector
using Use synonyms
water
in those cities Use synonyms
while
mining was the smallest.
turning to the details Linking Words
it is clear that
an average of 300-kilo litre of Linking Words
water
was consumed in Use synonyms
Perth
and Use synonyms
then
followed by Brisbane, Adelaide, and Sydney at 250, 230 and 200-kilo litre per year respectively. Canberra just only consumed twice as much as Linking Words
Perth
at about 140-kilo litre.
Meanwhile, 67 % of Use synonyms
water
was used for the agriculture Use synonyms
sector
in Australia. Electricity & gas and Use synonyms
water
supply, sewage and drainage supply were as same as one another at 7 % in Use synonyms
water
consumption. households were the second Use synonyms
sector
using Use synonyms
water
at that time at 9 % which is twice as larger as manufacturing and other industries just only 4 %. Mining was the least Use synonyms
sector
that consuming Use synonyms
water
just 2 % in those cities.Use synonyms
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