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The graph shows consumers' average annual expenditure on cell phone, national and international fixed- line services in America between 2001 in 2010

The graph shows consumers' average annual expenditure on cell phone, national and international fixed- line services in America between 2001 in 2010
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 illustrates the yearly amount of money American people spent on cellphone, national and international
fixed-line
services
 during the period from 2001 to 2010.
It is clear that
 there was a considerable change in the spending on national
landline
 and cellphone
services
. The figure for that
of
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mobile phones witnessed a significant rise
while
 the opposite was true for the national
landline
.
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 was
also
 experienced by international
fixed-line
services
 . In the year
of
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2001, making calls by national
fixed-line
 service was recorded to be at the top of the list. The expenditure on that stood at 700$.
However
, the money used on cellphone and international
landline
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landlines
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 was
at
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only 200$ and 250$ respectively. Over the next 5 years, there was a decrease
by
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 200$ in national
landline
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landlines
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while
 the distribution for that of mobile phones grew significantly by 300$. International
landline
 remained unchanged at 300$. During the following years until 2010,
the
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Americans spent less money on national
landline
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, the figure for that kept dropping and reached a low of 400$. Mobile
phone
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phones
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 became the most popular device as the expenditure on
it
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 increased significantly to over 700$. The international
fixed-line
services
 were not really preferred, the spending on those was stable at 300$.
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