The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by the UK residents in 1999. Summarize the information and make comparison. Write at least 150 words.

The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by the UK residents in 1999. Summarize the information and make comparison. Write at least 150 words.
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This
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provided line graph illustrates
visits
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in
million
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to and from the UK who travelled abroad, and for those that came to it between 1979 and 1999,
while
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the bar chart explains the best five countries where Britons visited, in 1999.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the number of
visits
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to and from the UK increased over the given period, and the most popular country visited by the British humankind was France.
To begin
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,
visits
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abroad were higher than for those who came to the UK,
this
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remained throughout the determined period.
However
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, the starting point for both was at a similar amount, at around 10
million
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, there was a dramatic increase in
visits
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abroad to become over 50
million
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, but the number of overseas residents rose steadily to just below 30
million
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. By far the most popular countries visited by British folk, in 1999, were France at approximately 12
million
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,
then
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followed by Spain at just around 9
million
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,
whereas
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the USA, Greece, and Turkey were the least popular countries at around, 4, 3, and 2
million
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visitors respectively.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 77%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words visits, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • upward trend
  • consistent increase
  • sharp rise
  • gradual growth
  • outbound travel
  • inbound tourism
  • popular destination
  • significantly outstripped
  • gap widened
  • given period
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