The diagram below shows the recycling process of plastics. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the recycling process of plastics.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The flow chart demonstrates how plastics are recycled in real life.
Overall
, there are 6 primary stages that make a recycling circle, beginning with selling plastic products to people and ending with delivering recycled products to shops.
To begin
with the process, communities buy, use, and throw away plastic goods, and
then
these throw away will be sorted out into two categories
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bottles
or bags and rubbish. After the sorting process, the
bottles
will go to sorting houses for the next steps
while
the bags and rubbish will be dumped at landfills. In the sorting houses, these
bottles
will be classified once again for the trucks to drive them to different processing factories. Before starting to do the assembly, inspection, testing, and packaging stages sequentially and bringing them to the shops, the sorted
bottles
need to be recycled in the factories where they are driven to.
Finally
, the recycled goods are on the shops’ shelves once again in the hand of the customers, and the new repetition starts.
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