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The graph gives information about coffee production in 4 different countries from 1990 to 2010

The graph gives information about coffee production in 4 different countries from 1990 to 2010
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The bar chart illustrates the amount of caffeine produced by four separate nations during the period between 1990 and 2010.
It is clear that
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 Brazil took up the largest percentage of
coffee
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 production.
Besides
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, the sum of
coffee
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 manufactured by 3 countries witnessed a rise, except for Columbia, which saw a decline. From 1990 to 2010,
coffee
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 manufacture in Brazil was recorded to be at the top of the list. The amount of that stood at 0.7
million
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tonnes
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 at the beginning of the observed period and increased constantly to 1.9
million
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tonnes
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 in 2010.
In addition
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, Indonesia produced a lower percentage of
coffee
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 but
also
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 grew gradually throughout the years. It was stable at 0.2
million
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tonnes
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 between 1990 and 1995 and
then
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 rose to 0.4
million
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tonnes
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 in 2010.
By contrast
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,
coffee
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 production in Columbia experienced a considerable drop within 20 years. In 1990, about 0.6
million
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tonnes
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 of
coffee
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 were made. After that, the total of that kept decreasing continuously and ended up at only 0.3
million
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tonnes
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 in 2010, which was equal to that of Vietnam.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, million, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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