The table shows the proportion of women in the labor force and women in management in five countries

The table shows the proportion of women in the labor force and women in management in five countries
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The table illustrates the number of women working in the workforce and at the managerial level in five countries including
Australia
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, Egypt, Sri Lanka, Japan and the USA.
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, it can be clearly seen that the proportion of female workers in all nations is consistent, except for Egypt. Regarding women as managers, the highest number is found in
Australia
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and the united states and the opposite is true for other countries. In terms of the female labour force, Japan stands at the highest position with 48% followed by the United States with 46%. The data in
Australia
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and Sri Lanka are identical at 42%. At the managerial level,
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in
Australia
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and the United States, the number of female managers is nearly the same as
tat
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that
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of men, at 43% , in Egypt and Sri Lanka, only 10% are working at
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level.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words australia with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Labor force
  • Management
  • Proportion
  • Gender gap
  • Leadership roles
  • Workforce participation
  • Variance
  • Economic factors
  • Cultural influences
  • Legal framework
  • Education
  • Maternity leave
  • Workplace discrimination
  • Career progression
  • Gender equality
  • Organizational policies
  • Case study
  • Representation
  • Strategies
  • Disparities
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