A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world.

Tourism

is one

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most important criteria in a

country

’s economy. many nations in the world are dependent on

tourism

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industry

as

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source of revenue.

However

,

tourism

can

also

make some

problem

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problems

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. In the following essay, I will provide some of

advantages

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and disadvantages

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the current problem. There are multifarious advantages in

tourism

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industry

. One of the main advantages is that the job market will expand. As more

tourist

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tourists

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enter a

country

, it is more likely that more people get those jobs that are linked to a specific area in the

tourism

industry

.

For example

, Iran is renowned for its hand-crafted carpet, many tourists come to Iran yearly to buy

these spectacular and beautiful carpet

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.

Therefore

, any jobs which

are relate

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to

carpet

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industry

can be taken by the applicants. Another advantage of

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tourism

industry

is that the

country

in general and the city

in particular

will be developed. In

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other word, the city’s scenery will be developed in a way that attracts tourists and encourages them to visit the

country

.

Therefore

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will take some serious uplifting

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plans

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to make the city look better.

For instance

, In Isfahan, some of the tourist

attraction

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places are much more developed in comparison to the other part of the city. One of

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disadvantage

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disadvantages

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is that the combination of cultures could sometimes make

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problems

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.

For instance

, there are some people who enter another

country

without respecting its culture.

As a result

,

local

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locals

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will confront these individuals, leading to arguments or even worse, physical altercations. In conclusion, the job opportunities and the development of a

country

will affect the state’s economy significantly.

However

, the drawback of the combination of

culture

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cultures

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can sometimes be problematic

to

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a

country

.