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The use of social media is replacing face to face interaction among many people in society. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

#media #face #interaction #people #society
These days, it’s often thought that social networks,
such
 as Facebook, Telegram and WhatsApp are becoming more popular than
face to
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face
 communication. I strongly believe that
advantages
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the advantages
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 outweigh
drawbacks
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the drawbacks
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. In the following
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 I will provide my ideas and give my own opinion. On the one hand, social
medias
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media
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 makes our lives more comfortable and easier.
In other words
, by using these apps on
daily
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a daily
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 basis individuals could spare their own money because communicating in social
medias
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 is almost free.
Although
, online messengers are multifunctional.
For example
, by using
app
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the app
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, which is called Skype people might speak with each other in real time with
good quality
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image
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images
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 of the
face
 of their
friend
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friends
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 or family member.
Furthermore
, one of the most popular social
network
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networks
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 nowadays-Facebook provides its users with an opportunity to know their
relatives
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relative's
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 birthdays and some personal information, even the social status of that human.
Thus
,
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people using online messengers never
face
 difficulties in communicating .
On the other hand
, there are some disadvantages of using social
medias
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media
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instead
 of speaking with others
face
 to
face
. Individuals, who are living in
online
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the online
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 world could
face
 problems when they go outside
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 because they are not prepared for speaking in
real
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the real
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 world with their mates. Another minus is that humans might get angry after speaking
in
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 social
medias
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media
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 because they could be scammed by others and their personal data might be used against them.
Moreover
, if people, which are only speaking in
cyber
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the cyber
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 world,
face
 humans
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 could not communicate in the same way as they do they simply don’t speak with them and ignore them all the time. In conclusion, in spite of positive factors,
such
 as:
comfortableness
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the comfortableness
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 of social networks, their costs and availability definitely outweigh the minuses of being scammed and getting angry
of
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 things, which are not very important.
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