The graph below shows the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.Write atleast 150 words.
The graph depicts numerous shops that were shut down and opened newly in a particular country between 2011 and 2018.
Overall
, from the chart
it is evident that the highest number of openings happened in 2011 Add a comma
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whereas
the highest closure occurred in 2013. In 2015 the country faced the lowest winding up of establishments in contrast
the opening of stores is found lowest in the year 2018.
When we compare both scenarios, in 2011 the country had 8500 openings making it the highest in the next 7 consecutive years although
in contrast
, the nation observed the highest closure of around 7000 in the year 2013. In addition
closure and opening perceived value is around 6000.
In 2015 people least closed their stores making the value slightly below 1000 while
the lowest openings were noted in 2018.Submitted by Leena Kapoor on
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