you have bought some clothing online and are not satisfied with you purchase write a ltter to the company that you bought the clothing from in your email: - give details of purchase. -describe the problem. - explain why you need a replacement urgently.

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Dear Sir or Madam,

Last

Sunday on the 13th of

this

month; I bought a white shirt from your online store in Toronto, Ontario.

Along with

khaki green shorts, and a pair of white socks. I bought those clothes without hesitation because I have trust in your fabrics and items.

However

, I had a problem with them. I was surprised to discover that the white shirt had a missing button on the bottom, the size of the

short

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shorts

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was not what I have ordered and the socks were of two different sizes.

although

I have never had

this

issue with you before, I am really disappointed. And I am asking you to fix

this

issue. It would be fine with me if I was not in need of those clothes. I and my family will travel out of the country

this

weekend and I have bought

this

outfit so I can wear it when I go to the beach. without them, I will have nothing comfortable to wear on my vacation. I am looking forward to your solution. Yours faithfully, John Walker.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

4.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

182 words

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you have bought some clothing online and are not satisfied with you purchase write a ltter to the company that you bought the clothing from in your email: - give details of purchase. -describe the problem. - explain why you need a replacement urgently.

Fully explain your ideas

Some experts believe that it it better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advaantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

These days, more and more people move away from the area where they were born and brought up when they become adults. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

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In many countries today, parents are able to choose to send their children to single-sex schools or co-educational schools. Some people think that children going to single-sex school have disadvantages later in life. To what extent do you agree?