The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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"The chart illustrates how many types of food were consumed domestically on a weekly basis in a European nation over a
period
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of a quarter of a century from 1979 to 2004, measured in
grams
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per capita.
Overall
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, the intake of chicken increased, those of the rest dropped by varying degrees, with the most pronounced decrease being seen in the
Beef
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. It is
also
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reported that
Beef
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far surpassed others during
this
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period
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. Looking first at intakes of
Beef
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and Lamb, the former commenced the
period
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with its highest data at around 220
grams
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, which was 70
grams
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more than the corresponding figure for the latter, at nearly 150
grams
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.
Thereafter
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, there was a drastic drop in the consumption of
Beef
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, ending at about 100
grams
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, despite hitting a peak at approximately 240
grams
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in 1984. Similar changes, but to a lesser extent, can be observed in
the
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Lamb's figure, falling to over 50
grams
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in 2004. Turning to the remaining kinds of food, just shy of 140
grams
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of Chicken was consumed, with a moderate increase to over 250
grams
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at the end
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of
this
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period
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. The consumption of Fish witnessed a fair decline from almost 60
grams
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to 40
grams
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at the end
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."
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
Vocabulary: Replace the words period, grams, beef with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • metric tons
  • fluctuations
  • upward/downward trend
  • stabilize
  • peak
  • trough
  • overtake
  • steady decline/increase
  • sustainable
  • dietary habits
  • preferences
  • health consciousness
  • per capita
  • poultry
  • veal
  • stagnant
  • gradual
  • surpass
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