The diagram below shows how solar panels can be used to provide electricity for domestic use. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The diagram below shows how solar panels can be used to provide electricity for domestic use.

Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The graph eliminates the components of a domestic solar system,
along with
it, the function of each part.
Overall
, the system is accounted for five main parts, including solar panels, inverter, electrical panel,
utility
meter, and
utility
grid
, which convert the solar power into
electricity
for indoor usage. First of all, the solar panels on the roof will intake energy from the sun, and convert it into DC current, after that, the inverter on the external wall will convert DC current into AC current, on top of that, it is in charge of controlling the
electricity
and production. The electrical panel beside the inverter is capable of relocating the
electricity
for domestic use.
On the other hand
, the
utility
meter and
utility
grid
which are connected to the
grid
have opposite
function
Fix the agreement mistake
functions
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, the former is to
sent
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send
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the excess solar power to the
grid
through the meters, whilst the latter is for
electricity
influxing from the
grid
when a solar power system is less than the consumption of domestic
electricity
use.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • diagram
  • solar panels
  • electricity
  • domestic use
  • renewable energy
  • photovoltaic cells
  • sunlight
  • generate
  • store
  • inverter
  • power grid
  • environmentally friendly
  • efficient
  • cost-effective
  • sustainable
  • reliable
  • alternative
  • traditional
  • fossil fuels
  • nuclear energy
  • emissions
  • solar energy
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • reduces
  • dependency
  • conclusion
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