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you recently made an purchase and the product was not the same as the description on the website. 1.what you purchase and when. 2.exactly how it is different from the description. 3.how would you like the company to fix that problem.

#purchase #product #description #website #company
DEAR SIR, MY NAME IS PRABHJOT SINGH.THE PURPOSE OF
THIS
 LETTER IS TO LODGE A COMPLAINT ABOUT MY
ORDER
 WHICH I PURCHASED
LAST
 WEEK. I MADE THE PURCHASE ON THE 16TH OF JULY. UNFORTUNATELY, MY PACKAGE WAS NOT LISTED ON THE WEBSITE. . AS MY FRIEND’S BIRTHDAY IS COMING IN A COUPLE OF WEEKS,I DECIDED TO GIVE HIM A SURPRISE ON
THIS
 OCCASION. HE IS FOND OF CAMERAS.
THEREFORE
, I ORDERED A CAMERA THROUGH YOUR WEBSITE. AT THE TIME OF PLACING THE
ORDER
 I WAS LOOKING AT THE DESCRIPTION WHERE IT HAD BEEN MENTIONED THAT THE CAMERA WOULD BE PROVIDED WITH CHARGER AND CASE.
HOWEVER
,WHEN I RECEIVED THE PARCEL CASE AND CHARGER WAS MISSING FROM IT.MY EXPECTATIONS BROKE AT THAT TIME. I WOULD APPRECIATE THAT IF YOU COULD EXCHANGE MY PURCHASE FOR A NEW ONE OR REFUND THE MONEY BACK.IN
ORDER
 TO EXCHANGE MY
ORDER
, I AM READY TO DO ALL OF THE FORMALITIES AS THAT WOULD BE THE BEST OPTION.I HOPE YOU WILL CONSIDER MY CONCERN AND DO YOUR BEST. I LOOK FORWARD TO HEARING FROM YOU. REGARDS, PRABHJOT SINGH
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