The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. » Write at least 150 words.

The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

» Write at least 150 words.
The first diagram illustrates the life cycle of the silkworm
while
the second diagram shows the
stages
in the production of
silk
cloth .
Overall
there are five different
stages
in the life cycle of moths starting from laying eggs on a green leaf to becoming an adult insect . The
silk
cloth
stages
begin with boiling cocoons in the water and ending it with a weave to be dried .
Initially
, eggs are laid on the underside of lead , and it remains there for ten
days
. After that , silkworm larvae hatch on green mulberry leaves which are considered their food . Eventually, the silkworm larva takes four to six weeks to produce
silk
thread
and the larva can be seen . Gradually, the
silk
thread
becomes a cocoon after three to eight
days
of processing.
At the end
of the
stages
, an adult moth emerges within 16
days
and life the cycle starts again. The second diagram shows that the cocoon takes 16
days
to become a moth eventually, it will be selected to be boiled in hot water .After that , it is unwinded to form a
thread
from 300m to 900m .The next stage is drying and weaving.
At the end
of the process, the
silk
thread
is dyed.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words stages, silk, days, thread with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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