The maps below show the change that occurred to a town named willington in 1780, 1860 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The three maps provide information about the changes which happened to a town named Willington
among
three specific years 1780, 1860 and 2000
Change preposition
in
Overall
, it can be said that the face of the town has changed dramatically, and it has turned into a more modern and habitable place.
As can be clearly seen in the first map, in the beginning
it was a barren and virgin island which was only reserved for a few number of villager.
Add the comma(s)
,beginning
On the other
hand
there have been some fundamental alterations in the town over time. Add a comma
,hand
To begin
with, the bridge and road which allow transportation between two sides of the river were built on the west side of the village instead
of farms between 1780 and 1860. Secondly
accommodation opportunities had increased. To clarify, the number of homes first reached 200 in 1860 Add a comma
,Secondly
then
it reached 500. Another important change is that facilities which were not seen on the first map had occurred. For
example
sports fields, schools and shops had occurred, and Add a comma
,example
finally
, a wetland for birds was opened in the south-west of the place.Submitted by yunussemreozkaya on
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