The maps below show the change that occurred to a town named willington in 1780, 1860 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the change that occurred to a town named willington in 1780, 1860 and 2000.  Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The three maps provide information about the changes which happened to a town named Willington
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three specific years 1780, 1860 and 2000
Overall
, it can be said that the face of the town has changed dramatically, and it has turned into a more modern and habitable place. As can be clearly seen in the first map, in the
beginning
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it was a barren and virgin island which was only reserved for a few number of villager.
On the other
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there have been some fundamental alterations in the town over time.
To begin
with, the bridge and road which allow transportation between two sides of the river were built on the west side of the village
instead
of farms between 1780 and 1860.
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accommodation opportunities had increased. To clarify, the number of homes first reached 200 in 1860
then
it reached 500. Another important change is that facilities which were not seen on the first map had occurred.
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sports fields, schools and shops had occurred, and
finally
, a wetland for birds was opened in the south-west of the place.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.

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