The diagram below shows the water supply system in Australia at present and in the future.
The two maps provide information about the changes which will happen to Australia with the changing
water
supply system in the future.
Overall
it can be said that the working method of the organization will change dramatically, and it will turn into a more modern and useful system.
As can be clearly seen in the first diagram which shows the current structure water
goes to the households, shops, city and factories from storage. Then
waste water
goes to the water
treatment unit for transferring to the river. Storm water
goes to the river too.
On the other
hand
there will have been some fundamental alterations to the system. Add a comma
,hand
To begin
with
wastewater and stormwater will not be passed to the river.The Add a comma
,with
water
treatment plant will produce pure-
Correct your spelling
pure water
water
while
getting wastewater from people. Furthermore
stormwater will go to the water
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