You are a current student of Loren Brusque University, studying Business Administration. You want to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager you have recently seen on the university's notice board. Write a letter to Mr. Walker, and •Give your reason for writing •Tell about your education •Describe your work experience and explain why you would be suitable for the job.

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Dear Mr Walker I am writing

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letter requesting you consider me when choosing me for the post of Quality Assurance Manager

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mentioned on the board of the university. Sir,I am a student of your university for the

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four years in the Business Administration department.Recently,I completed my diploma in Business General .

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,I am taking classes in accounting and statistics.Since I am a brilliant student and scored 98% all over India so our institution offers me a scholarship .

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,I am studying on a scholarship basis. As you know,studies related to accounts are generally difficult so I am unable to do a full-time job as I want to give my first preference to studies.

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,I worked as a quality control at Give and Go company for almost six months.So,I have enough experience related to

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job position.I will be very grateful if you would give me a chance for an interview .I will try my best and never let you down. Hope to get a positive response from your side. Yours sincerely, Kiran

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

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7 paragraphs

173 words

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