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With recent improvements online, it is increasingly possible for people to leave reviews for goods and services they have purchased. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

#improvements #people #reviews #goods #services
Technology nowadays had
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 the world, especially the internet service, which
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 people can do almost
everythings
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everything
 online compare to past times. Not the only
one
 but
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leaving the
reviews
 online is
one
 of the
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show
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 that technology had
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 our's life. Before online
review
 had been
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,
customer
review
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reviews
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 will normally be collected via phone
call
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 and feedback
letter
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letters
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 or
form
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forms
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 from the
customer
. Time flies, and nowadays, online
review
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reviews
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 had become a trend, and we as a consumer can easily find the
review
 on
the
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google map, or any social media. There are some advantages of
this
 trend,
where
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 it save
the
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time of
customer
 to find
the
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reviews
 of the goods and
services
, and what
customer
 need to do is just online search for the specific items or
services
 name, and there are
alot
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a lot
 of
review
 will be listed out.
Besides
,
customer
 can post their most real
reviews
 immidietatly after they enjoy the
services
 or goods,
instead
 of giving the
reviews
 after
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 days or
few
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 weeks later.
However
, there are some disadvantages too. It is hard for the business to control the
review
 online, as everyone had their own right to give any
reviews
, even
they
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 never enjoy
the
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such
 goods or
services
.
This
 would lead to an
inproper
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improper
 competition between the same industry. In conclusion, leaving the
reviews
 online is a
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 development and
one
 of the results of the
improving
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 of the internet
services
 which
it
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cannot
be stop
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, and we as a
customer
 should use
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 tools properly to avoid any bad results.
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  • Transparency
  • Trustworthiness
  • Informed consumers
  • Immediate feedback
  • Competitive environment
  • False reviews
  • Objective
  • Comprehensive experience
  • Short-term satisfaction
  • Long-term quality
  • Innovation
  • Garner
  • Representation
  • Fosters
  • Enhances
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