Methods of transporation for people travelling to one university for work or study in 2004 and 2009 in the UK. The two pie charts compare five categories of UK travelling percentage of university (train, bicycle, bus, walking, car,) from 2004 to 2009) Units are measured in proportion.

Methods of transporation for people travelling to one university for work or study in 2004 and 2009 in the UK.

 The two pie charts compare five categories of UK travelling percentage of university (train, bicycle, bus, walking, car,) from 2004 to 2009) Units are measured in proportion.
The two charts compare five categories of UK travelling percentage of university (train, bicycle, bus, walking, car,) from 2004 to 2009) Units are measured in proportion. It is noticeable that the percentage of cars experienced a significant fall over 5 years period.
While
this
figure for buses applies saw a big rise. In 2004, 51% of the average UK work or study rate went on cars which was the largest pie of the chart,
however
, by 2009 the figure for
this
category had fallen by 28%. During a decade, the demand for buses at UK universities experienced a considerable increase from 33% to 46 %. In terms of tripping ,the bicycle category made up 9% in 2004 after 20 years
this
figure saw a sharp increase to 46% making it the largest retail sector of all.
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